Mohabbat

"Mohabbat bhi Zindagi ki tarah hoti hai
Har mod asaan nehi hota, har mod pe khushiya nehi milti.
Jab hum zindagi ka saath nehi chhodte toh
Mohabbat ka saath kyun chhode??
---Mohabbatein

2019-04-25

Waiting...Half Fiction #BlogchatterA2Z


So what will you do now…Arpan asked after listening all the incidents took place in last few days.


“Udne de parindo ko aajzad fizaa me Ghaalib,jo tere apne honge who laut aayege kisi roz”…Rahul recited this Shayri in reply.

What does it mean?...Subham and Arpan asked simultaneously.
Let the birds fly in free air, the ones, which are yours, will come back…Rahul translated in English.

Approx. after one and half decade of this decision, when Priyanka visited his home town with a long leave for the Durga Puja celebration, one day night before going to sleep she finished the story of Rahul and Tina, Mimi concluded

…so the "Angel" never came back, with the help of her two wings she flown far enough from the most devoted admirer of her life.




That day night, when I laid down in the floor after completing two small pegs with the intention to concentrate in sleeping, Arpan still had some questions and I had to answer them.

So what will happen later on in Tina’s life?...He asked 

She will be happy, she will spend a life she wished, will have a steady and secured life but a dissatisfaction will always chase her and eventually those will come out with time through her different activities and I must inform you that if you don’t allow me to sleep now, then my dissatisfaction can lead to split personality and that can transform me into a violent one.




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10 comments:

  1. I'm so intrigued to know how your story will end.. or will it?
    Noor Anand Chawla

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    1. Glad to know you are enjoying this series, you have raised a very logical question...intelligent mind.

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  2. split personality. a new twist everyday and seriously like Noor I am curious to know the end.

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    1. Lets see what happens, glad to know you are enjoying it.

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  3. Just when I thought this is going to have a happy ending though the longing for a beloved will always haunt Tina, I see a mention of the split personality. Now that we have only 3 posts, I have a feeling that she's going to end up in an asylum at the end. I really want to know how it ends.

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    1. No, no she will not be in asylum, generally the "Practical ones" does not end being psychiatric patient, its the "impractical ones" who have taken that responsibility.
      Glad to know you are so much involved with this series. Thanks for sharing your views.

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  4. Will this story end in 3 posts? Or you are going to surprise us with abrupt ending?:)

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  5. Now I am curious to reach till end with this story Jyotirmoy, the tadka of split personality was unpredictable :) will catch up :)

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