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Lover...Half Fiction #BlogchatterA2Z

Once in a pleasant evening when I was in a good mood and was enjoying the cold breeze while roaming in the terrace Arpan appeared there, we were talking on random isuues, that time he informed me, you know once I came to know that Tina is pregnant.saw her in our town but did not inform Rahul, 

“I know”…I replied.

He was shocked with my reply,he exclaimed

…you knew it!!!

I replied with a smile. 

We remained silent for a while and then he asked

…there must be some thoughts knocked into your mind that time, would you like to share, better if you make a story.
You know, those days Rahul was going through tough feelings in life, his heart was totally broken, he lost faith on human beings, he became disinterested in everything, a dream he dreamt for so many years was already met a devastation, he was shocked with the surprises form the life, he was really in a very poor condition even he lost interest in his own life, was afraid to make wishes and to feel life with a new angle, so keeping all these in mind and the pregnancy of Tina I created this story…

"He" said…She is a very nice girl. No one understands her better than me, even not her parents. I request you earnestly, always try to keep her happy, she has the habit to hide her pains, you have to realize her deeply otherwise you will never be able to know whether she is suffering or not. She is a very simple minded girl, she does not have the capability to realize the minimum complexities, this is the reason some people misguide her and some people use her for their own profit, you know, the girls she thinks are her best friends actually those girls never wished anything good for her, rather they have always played nice tricks with her, still they play but she is unable to realize. You have to make the wrong people out of her life otherwise may be one day she will misunderstand you also, don’t be surprised hearing this, when you will be a part of her life then you will realize, this can happen for her simple minded nature and strong belief to wrong people and false friends. May be one day she will share her life’s story with you and if you analyze with  minimum common sense then you will realize how people has taken profit of her simplicity. Try to keep her happy all the time, try to give her all the happiness of life. She has huge interest in dancing, try to convince her to learn dancing. She is a good painter also, take care of this matter. She learned singing but the truth is she is not so good in that. Whenever you buy dress for her, buy red colored dresses, she looks like an angle in that color. Though, it’s a different matter that whenever she wears any dress, the dress looks more elegant and gorgeous. One more thing  I wanna suggest is …don’t make her angry frequently, specially don’t make her so much angry so that she needs to shout, because her voice is very calm, steady and unique, and I don’t want that for you her voice got damaged. There are some closed ones of her who are actually very jealous of her happiness and prosperity, they are very close to her so it’s tough to make her understand about those jealous people, you should carry on your effort and I know she will believe you for sure. She does not have the habit to talk much, but the people she loves a lot …she talks with them for hours after hours, she will also talk with you a lot but you have to take care whether she is being tired or not. One more important thing, though she appears to be a very tough girl but actually she is very soft hearted, watching her moody face and attitude it’s tough to realize, so never misunderstood her any time. 

Saying all these at a stretch he stopped.

The listener asked---should I tell her about you? She misunderstood you a lot.

"He" smiled and said---you will not be able to do so.
Then he left the place.

“He” loved Tina for his entire life, this is the reason Tina was not only in his heart rather in his soul.

After five years of Tina’s marriage he died for loosing interest in life.

Now “He” is in heaven, he is a soul now and “the listener”  ---whom he was giving suggestion is an another soul, God has chosen that another soul to send in the earth as the child of Tina.

Listening this story Arpan smiled and said

…no one can know Tina and Rahul better than you.


  1. I m glad that you found the plot moving. Been waiting for your post.

    1. Glad to know you are enjoying this, thanks a lot.

  2. Amazing, it's really need a different thought process for such fiction

  3. Story is moving ahead with new directions, great!! Keep it coming :)

    1. Glad to know you are enjoying the read, thanks a lot.

  4. Wow, I'm very impressed!