After
reading the poems of some of his closed ones, like his maternal uncle and
two of his friends, Rahul felt to write poems like them.
The
consecutive seven days effort resulted in total disappointment, he was unable
to write a single line even was unable to form a single phrase.
Long three
years have passed by from that day and now when he thinks about how the day was
before going to sleep the reviews on his poetry by the readers and the listeners…”your poems
contains so much pain”, “how do you write such painful poetry”, “it was really
a heart wrenching one”…make him surprised.
The tears
from his eyes from last sixteen years making his pillow wet every night, after
the unintentional break up with Tina, but from last three years the pillow getting
less wet, some water droplets has taken the form of poems.
In this
context I wanna mention one of my shayris…
अर्ज़ किया है
तेरे दिए हुए आंसु
हर बून्द मे दर्द
सिमट लिया तो शायरी
बन गइ.
Published in
my “Tadap” Series, for more you can click here…Tadap(The Sufferings)
Such is the pain of one who leaves..you did this one quite differently.
ReplyDeleteI feel your words.. Poetry can be healing
ReplyDeletePain is productive, no doubt. Well said by noted chhayawadi poet Dr. Sumitra Nandan pant..
ReplyDelete"Viyogi hoga pehla kavi, aah se upja hoga gaan,
Nikal kar aankhon se chupchaap, bahi hogi kavita anjaan. "
So nicely portrayed.
Yes shayris and poetries are very reliving.
ReplyDeleteWah wah! Your shayri is intense and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNoor Anand Chawla
Indeed it is pain that gives rise to the most heart wrenching words. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteWah wah
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